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Sunday(one and a half hour to go)writing Prompt Bad Poem

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Siva Ramanathan	Sunday(one and a half hour to go)writing Prompt Bad Poem	Lead	[-]
Posts: 517 (05/23/09 09:08:18) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Damn The Damn damn! this mood. damn! past memory. damn! this reversal of roles. damn! the distance which is self chosen. damn! the wishful thinking. damn! your wanting to retain memories. damn! the mark maker. damn! the fact that you are more than animal. damn! this dwelling in the past. damn! the present lifelessness. damn! the truth of the tense. damn! there is a possibility. damn! no harm in trying. damn! go back to your girl. damn! make the was is. Sivakami Velliangiri
SJane30		#1	[-]
Posts: 377 (05/23/09 23:28:52) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Ha! Yes, definitely not the greatest poem, but not as bad as "bad." I actually like the emphatic "damn!" and how the poem feels like a fist pounding a desk. I have to say "make the was is" is indeed pretty bad. Lol. smiles, sarah
Siva Ramanathan	I have no idea of what a bad poem is	#2	[-]
Posts: 518 (05/24/09 00:38:55) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Sarah I used to read bad poetry in the last page of Spectator.It is 'bad' not as a poem,but 'bad in the content.Thanks. Sivakami
toniclark		#3	[-]
Posts: 4027 (05/24/09 03:07:58) Administrator Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Hmmm... I like it in a way. I keep trying to read a story into it. It would be a good experiment to replace the generalities with specifics. Toni
Siva Ramanathan	I thought the idea is to write a bad poem	#4	[-]
Posts: 519 (05/24/09 03:48:23) Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Toni If I did that will it not become a good poem? Sivakami
toniclark		#5	[-]
Posts: 4030 (05/25/09 13:33:26) Administrator Reply Quote More My Recent Posts Message Me Connection Blocking Invite Ignore User's Posts	Probably! Ha ha!

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