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XIII. 1 The Wrongest (making)
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XIII. 1 The Wrongest (making) |
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Posts: 2 (06/15/09 13:14:46) |
Last Edited By: piphany 06/26/09 13:30:56.
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Posts: 1254 (06/15/09 13:30:17) |
Oh, I like this a lot. Nice chatty style and so many fine details thrown in. I think you've got us off to a good start. I've been wondering where
everyone is as well. But I'm about to jump in!
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Posts: 948 (06/15/09 14:49:01) |
Mignon -- this is great! My favorite bit is "too busy frosting flippin' cupcakes" !!! In the line just above that, I'd suggest reversing
hand-thrown and broken for logic's sake, but I do love the reference to a "crock" as a real crock. Clever!
We're all here, joining in one by one! |
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Posts: 1617 (06/15/09 21:09:22) |
I'm here too, just might come in a day late
I dont' know where our hall of fame went! Oh dear |
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Posts: 4051 (06/16/09 02:29:07) Administrator |
I'm late to the party. Will try to join in soon. I just saw this post and found the Hall of Fame. It got unstuck (un-stickied).
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piphany |
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Posts: 6 (06/16/09 14:44:16) |
Howdy, ladies! Thanks for the input -- and the prompts, which I'm interpreting very loosely.
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Posts: 4056 (06/17/09 16:46:28) Administrator |
I agree! Good one. I, too, really like "too busy frosting flippin' cupcakes." Gosh, that should be a prompt! Off to a good start, Mignon.
Engaging narrator and tone.
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